On the other hand, Becca finds herself very unable to control her lust for him. But as they get closer and closer and she falls in love with him, the truth about her hypnosis session comes to light and Turner wonders how real her feelings are. I really enjoyed this book. The writing was LOL funny - the opening scene was amazing -, the plot was a bit quirky, and Turner and Becca were adorable. And the love scenes Wow, they were sizzling hot and borderline erotica.
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Indecent Suggestion contains some crisp prose and flashes of humor. Becca Mercer and Turner McCloud have been best friends since the first grade. Now they work together at the same Indianapolis advertising agency, and they share a secret passion that could cost them both their jobs. In an opening that will strike some readers as cute and others as cheesy, they sneak away to a storage closet to satisfy their desire.
Over much innuendo-laden banter, he asks her to light his fire. Becca decides they should go to a hypnotherapist to kick the habit. This leads to the first of many long sections of introspection, where he looks at her and thinks how sexy she is, and she looks at him and thinks how sexy he is, and so on. The author is obviously trying to build the sexual tension between them, but these sections go on so long that they stopped being sexy and started to become dull.
It was all I could do to keep from skimming. Unfortunately, they arrive very early for their appointment. I had several issues with this premise. First of all, as soon as the misunderstanding is introduced and the hypnotist plants the wrong suggestion, I knew everything that was going to happen in the rest of the book.
The plot is obvious, from the sex that follows, to the inevitable dark moment when they learn the truth, to the easy resolution that will get them past it. The author never steps off that predictable path for a moment. Combined with how slowly it moved, the story already had two strikes against it. But the unbalanced nature of the relationship made me very uncomfortable.
While his reactions to her are all natural, she has no control over anything she does. This is a pivotal moment that could make or break their careers. She starts groping Turner under the table.
Outside…I need you right now. You know? There may be readers who find it funny or sexy to see a professional woman making a fool of herself in a business setting. I was just embarrassed for her. For the most part, the sex is as hot as promised, and the author gets off some funny lines.
The characters are somewhat likable, though also underdeveloped. This book feels very much like one of those, just padded with tons of introspection to fill out the required word limit of a longer series book. The story itself is very simple. The endless introspection could have been reigned in without really changing anything. That would have made for a stronger book, although maybe not quite strong enough to overcome the questionable premise. Buy Indecent Suggestion:.
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